Wall 50: Wobble
Let’s learn something new, shall we?
Writing a villanelle:
19 lines, iambic pentameter if you want to be fancy. rhyme scheme –
A1
B
A2A
B
A1A
B
A2A
B
A1A
B
A2
A
B
A1
A2
The numbered A’s must repeat as if they are a refrain. Duality of context helps change the meaning of each iteration as it is read. This is a very rigid poetic format, but what you will find is that it liberates you and your thoughts. Think of it as a master-piece shoehorn. If you complete one, I can say (broadly) that you’ve accomplished something of merit.
Hug someone today, they may need it.
An Immortal Lament
I’ll stay inside until the night,
Now and ever the only way,
I do not dare to fight the light.
The innocent I often fright,
So early day I do not stray,
I’ll stay inside until the night.
The sun always my source of blight,
I turn to dust and blow away,
I do not dare to fight the light.
Ages ago I played a knight,
Then found a way to ever stay,
I’ll stay inside until the night.
In danger I can take to flight,
Atop the wind escape and sway,
I do not dare to fight the light.
Alas, I have erred in hindsight,
Alone, alone I spend my day,
I’ll stay inside until the night,
I do not dare to fight the light.
Benjamin
March 24, 2009 at 8:24 am
Bravo! I did not think anyone would bother. I am very impressed! Any more people or poets reading?
brianmz
March 24, 2009 at 9:09 am